场面描写

此章主要从场面描写、心理描写和语言风格入笔分析一合作品。

This chapter is from the scene description , language style of psychological description and analysis of a co-product into the pen .

《诗经》首开诗酒交融的先河，这时的诗多还仅是对饮酒场面的描写。

" Book of Songs " the first pioneer to open Shijiu blend , when the poem is more than just drinking but also the description of the scene .

韦尔蒂很重视共时场面的描写，把众多人物集中于几个主要场景，又把主要场景集中在危机、失败等关键时刻。

She pays much attention to the depictions of simultaneity scene , collecting many characters in some major scenes and designing the major scenes in the critical time of danger and failure .

不足之处是心理描写过多，可以在动作、场面上的描写多一些，另外，还可以加入环境描写，这样文章会显得更生动。

Deficiency is the psychological description is overmuch , can be in action , rub depictions of some more , in addition , can also add environment description , this article will look more vivid .