wordiness

When overused , prepositions can weaken writing and contribute to wordiness .

如果过度使用介词，会降低写作质量，造成冗余。

Well , the repeated faulty wording is a wordiness of the sentence structure , which should be deleted .

语病重复是语句结构上的累赘，是应该删除的多余成分。

To achieve this , try to avoid wordiness or redundancy . Concreteness Concreteness means making the message specific , definite and vivid .

该具体时就不要笼统含糊，应该让读信人得到准确的信息，但要灵活掌握。

It is different from wordiness or superfluous information in that the former is necessary , meaningful , while the latter is unnecessary and meaningless .

它不同于啰嗦或多余信息.前者是必要的，有意义的；而后者是多余的，无意义的。

Although both structures are grammatically correct , phrases like the attorney of the claimant increase the wordiness and complexity of a sentence and make your writing more difficult to read .

虽然两种表达在语法上都是正确的，但是用of的词组表达则显得语句更为累赘，使句子更加难以理解。

While this is sometimes a difficult balance to strike , you should review and edit your resume with a very discriminating eye toward reducing unnecessary wordiness . Every word in your resume should have a purpose .

当然这样做是很困难的，你需要从不同角度重新审视编辑你的简历，尽量减少不必要的废话，确保简历中的每一句话都有一个目的。